The gun now nuzzled the back of Jason’s skull. “Go ahead, bitch,” Romm said. “Keep on talking. Your boyfriend did so much of that already that I’m this close to saying to hell with it and killing both of you right now.”
She pressed her lips together. She didn’t know what had happened to put Jason in the submissive position, but she wasn’t willing to stand there while Romm scattered his brains across the pavement.
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Very intriguing. Looks like she's going to have to take charge.
High tension. Well written. Thank you.
Wow, powerful!
Intense.
Uh-oh. That's trouble.
Way to leave us hanging :-) Great six.
Ooo Great six!! What did happen to make him submissive? *ponders*
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Intense and powerful! Great six.
Eeek! Nice way to suck us in!
Wow...I can feel the tension!!
Wow, so many questions and no answers. Great 6.
Wow, that's intense! Great six! :)
Ooh! I *so* want to read this!
guess it's up to a woman, again, to take care if the mess :D Nice
He might be submissive, but that doesn't mean she has to be! How will she get out of this?
It's a man holding the gun, but I can't help but hope it's the woman who'll wind up bringing the stand-off to a close. Cool six.
Lots of tension in this six. Wolves and guns. I wonder if the villain is human.
Vivid six!
Wow, I love it. Very exciting.
Talk about tension! Excellent six!
I agree with Lisa, great tension. Way to hook your readers!
ow. Not looking good for any of them. Great six!
Barb
Powerful teaser! Can't wait to read what she does next.
Great 6! Lots of tension and suspense!
Oh man. I can't wait to see what happens!
Oh my goodness, that was so intriguing. I really want to know what happens next. Fantastic six!
That's a lot of tension. The last line really ratchets things up as I imagine her having to handle this problem the 'hard way'.
Ooooh such tension. Great six.
Glad to see your SSS. Good stuff (as usual:)
Great suspense! What will she do to take charge without getting Jason killed?
Excellent! More please!
Powerful six! I want to read more!
Terrific six and oh, that cover. Good writing.
Oooh, this is powerful! Great six!
Oh Oh I think she's going to blow! Great six!
o_O Well that was a hell of a thing to read first thing in the morning. I like it!
Great six! Way to just drop kick you into the moment.
Whoa, intense! Love it.
Awesome six!
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