“There’s nothing wrong in asking for what you want, Flanna. If I don’t show you anything else before this is all over, I’m going to prove to you that it’s OK to say what you’re thinking. How can you expect to get any kind of happiness if nobody knows how to give it to you?”
“You’ve always known.”
The simple declaration spilled from her lips before she could stop it, taking both of them by surprise. Jason’s tongue darted over his lips, and then he was moving up, climbing her body, his mouth adoring her flesh along the way.
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I totally melted when she said, "You've always known."
Ah. Me, too. I'm with Lisa. Great declaration.
I'm with Lisa too. So sweet and heartbreaking, pulls the reader into the couple with just three words. Fantastic!
I was more focused on the hot lips "adoring her flesh". :D
Great advice from Jason. Plus he got an immediate reward :-) Great six.
Wonderful development in this scene!
Aww, that's sweet! :)
Oo, love his lips adoring her flesh. Great teaser.
I, too, love the adoring lips! Fab!
Wonderful six! A sweet, yet sexy moment. I also love your inspiration for the week picture. That guy is hot like fire. :-) Keep up the good work.
I like the "You've always known." as well. Great six! And those eyes on your inspiration are so captivating.
Great six. "You've always known" is perfect.
That's a sweet snippet. :-)
I really like this guy. He gives great advice and...other things obviously. Great six!
Those three words - "You've always known", did it for me. Every man wants to hear a woman say out loud what they're both thinking. Lady V., very nicely done
Sigh. A man who wants to know what you're thinking AND who already knows what she needs. Am I in heaven?
yes like the You've always known but adoring her flesh is inspiration
"You've always known."
Definitely the best part!
Aww. -heartmelt- Lovely, tender scene. Awesome six. (And I love the cover!)
Sexy Six! Ask, Flanna, ask...I just bet Jason can provide anything your heart desires. ;)
Very sensual six. I love that last bit "his mouth adoring her flesh along the way".
Wow!! Love this scene!! Very romantic and sexy as well.
This is so intense and poignant! Very well done!
'You've always known'. Such a vulnerable remark. His reply without words was perfect. Very nice.
A very tender Six! LOVED it!
Nice, "You've always known." Love it.
Yummy! You packed a lot of meaning into a small number of words. I like what was unsaid as much as what was.
And thank you for your kind posts on my offering as well.
Her last line is said with such conviction I'm glad she didn't take it back.
Be still my beating heart. So-o romantic! Love it xx
Wow...very nice six. And thanks for stopping by my blog and reading my six:).
Lovely chemistry between these two--hot six!
That one line's enough to give a girl shivers! Great six!
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