“Funny, but I have this distinct feeling that you’re not going to need too much of my help.”
“Then why stick around?”
His tongue darted across his lips, his gaze falling for a fraction of a second to her mouth before he replied. “I told you. I don’t give up. Even when I know the damsel in distress can probably kick my ass.”
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Ah, he's a determined guy. Great six.
Sexy six - loved this line: 'His tongue darted across his lips, his gaze falling for a fraction of a second to her mouth'
I like a steadfast man!
excellent facial reactions - says so much
Fantastic six, so visual and emotive. Thank you.
Perceptive guy. :) At least he knows she can kick his ass. Feisty characters. Great six.
Yes, very perceptive! And what determination!
I like this guy, and after only 6 sentences! Very nicely done, Vivien!
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Oh, these two are gonna be fun!
And i have a feeling she will kick his ass! LOL Great six!
Guy has a lot of guts. I like him.
Great six!
Barb
Lovely six! Thank you for visiting Tabooindeed also!
Love the last line! Great six!
Love his attitude! Great teaser.
Nervous but determined, I like it! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
guts, nerves and determination. Awesome :-)
Love the last line! A very determined man. :) Great six!
Okay, I missed last week, so now I need to go back and read. Love the lip licking, could mean so many things...
I love that he still wants to be there and that he admits she could kick his ass.
Love it when the hero's into competent gals (ass-kickery being a subgenre of competence). Makes me wonder about the whole story. :)
Love a kick ass heroine. Great six.
Ooooh, interesting relationship dynamic.
Nice! That sounds sexy. Not sure if men would lick their lips, but...it just sounds right xD
~Cheryl M.
Great six!! I like that he sees and acknowledges her strength. :)
Great six. Like a man who does something just coz it's the right thing to do.
Love her for being strong. Love him for sticking around to do the right thing. Nice six.
I think she's met her match, lucky girl! Love your cover, by the way. :)
Love his attitude. Great six!
Six sentences and I already know this guy. Well done.
Brilliant six, well done! :)
Ha! This is great!
Nice innuendo with the tongue movement and his eyes. :)
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