...The images that filled my head weren’t the ones from the club, though I doubted I would ever forget the taste of his mouth on mine. No, I remembered him in the sunlight, the slight pressure of his hand on my back, the lyrical cadences of his voice as we talked more about our families. I had learned he had three siblings he hadn’t seen since he’d come out, and nieces and nephews he’d never seen at all. He’d told me about moving to Rome, and his first boyfriend, while I talked about how excited I’d been the first time I’d been able to kiss a guy without worrying Pastor Grant was going to catch me and renounce me for a sinner.
I didn’t want to spend the night with a stranger. I wanted Davide.
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14 comments:
This introspection is so sweet. You managed to create empathy for both characters. I want Jonathan to be able to be with Davide, too!
I am enjoying these snippets. I'm going to indulge for a bit longer before I buy the book.
Vivien, your writing is beautiful. Thanks so much.
Wonderful how smoothly you inserted that background. Gives the characters such depth.
A very sweet six to reveal more about these characters.
Very lyrical, and definitely a character revealing six. Well done.
Very moving six!
So poignant. You always find the humanity in your characters, Vivien.
wonderful characters and how the stigma of being gay affects them. So sad when family renounces you. And it happens oftenn.
Beautiful evocation of his feelings.
The memories are so evocative - I hope they end up together. Very engaging six!
"the slight pressure of his hand on my back,"
This line evokes wonderful memories and great feelings for either gender. Well done!
Sounds like he's totally smitten! I'm enjoying your snippets from this story!
You have such a knack for tapping into the emotions of readers and characters alike so every word is infinitely relatable. Beautiful!
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