Within two minutes, we were back in the sunshine, a map of the cemetery with the grave I wanted clearly marked in hand.
Not all of the crosses bore names. I tried not to look at them too closely as we walked by, but when we passed the third one with the same inscription, I pulled my glasses off to scrub at my eyes.
Davide immediately stopped. He waited patiently for me to pull myself together, silent and present, the only two things I needed right now.
If I was losing it over, “Here rests in honored glory, a Comrade in Arms, known but to God,” how did I ever think I was going to make it with a grave I actually recognized?
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19 comments:
A very sad snippet. You really captured the emotion of walking through a military graveyard. Nicely done. I want to know whose grave she's looking for.
Very emotional. Well done!
A very sad six! Well written! :)
Your snippets always pack a punch and this one is particularly powerful. Sweet of Davide to come support him.
Emotional. I understand this emotion a lot. Nice six.
Very emotive and a powerful description of the cemetry's effect.
Loved the emotion!
is he looking for a particular one? he marked it on the map... sad six
Very interested to find out whose grave they're trying to find.
Incredibly moving, Vivien. Love this six.
Emotional six—well done.
Oh I love this so much. I had a similar reaction to the war cemetaries in Normandy. Moving this up my TBR list.
Powerful six, Vivien. I really liked the whole flow of it. Nicely done. :)
Yes, this brougt back the PBS program on the Civil War dead and the recognition that the government had some responsibility to keep track of soldiers--but it isn't always possible. Very emotional. (And I hope the cpatcha doesn't defeat me this week; I give up after a couple of tries.)
Oh my. So much emotion and description in here. Very moving.
Very heartfelt. Well done!
So much emotion, glad Davide is there to support him. Excellent, very emotional six.
Touching and beautifully written, Vivien. Thanks.
Poignant and emotional. You've captured this moment beautifully!
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