...The glow left from my orgasm remained a lot longer than it might otherwise, because of that. The fantasy of having someone like this all the time was almost more delicious than the sex had been. I live a life of closed doors and whispered secrets, where denying who I am is as natural as breathing, where having someone walk next to me only means one of my students is having problems and is trailing beside me in hopes of help. Men didn’t walk me home, or slide their hand into my back pocket as a show of ownership. So I was going to enjoy this as long as it lasted, even if none of it was real. Because for tonight, I was going to pretend it was.
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16 comments:
I loved the emotion in these six sentences, the sense of longing. Well done!
Oh, I can sense his hope that it does last more than one night. Great six! :)
This is so heartfelt and poignant. My heart breaks for him!
Beautifully written and so full of emotion. :)
Simply fantastic!
Wow. Love this, all of it, but this one really hit me hard >"I live a life of closed doors and whispered secrets, where denying who I am is as natural as breathing..."
I like it. Very nice job of capturing the sweet dream of living a life one normally only fantasizes about. Nicely done!
Fabulous insight into Jonathan's mind! Love the emotion in it!
Very intense emotion in his thoughts. I really felt for him. Great sense of longing.
yes the closed door line is excellent and unfortunately true in most of N America. He longs for what most of us consider "normal" Very sad that it's not his normal and very good that he has found it if only for a while
Fantastic emotion in this and just wow. Very nicely done.
Awww, this snippet just grabs the heart and won't let go! Well done, terrific excerpt!
Very evocative and emotional six! Excellent work!
A tormented soul. Wow. The way you show his confusion and restlessness with himself is undeniably strong. This was a wonderful six, lovely.
Such a great description!
Yeah, that's very sweet... I hope he gets a happy ending. Thanks for sharing!
Heartbreaking, but I sincerely hope Jonathan gets his happy ending.
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