Continuing on from last week's scene with Maya and Dec's finally getting sexual...
He must’ve felt her orgasm coming. Seconds before his fucking and sucking sent her careening over the edge, Dec’s mouth slid down and away, his jaw dropping, his teeth grazing over the soft skin of her inner thigh before finding the spot where it was most sensitive. Maya felt the distinct prick of his fangs sinking into her flesh, but it was the first almost painful pull that catapulted her into coming, unfettering her as her climax picked her up in fiery waves and rocked her through its wake, everything spinning out of control around her as she rode it to its finish.
Maya was only half-aware of Dec disengaging from the bite. But when he slid up her body, his weight pressing her more firmly into the mattress, she turned automatically into his kiss, tasting herself on his tongue as she moaned in satisfaction. “That ... was...” she started to say when they broke apart, but the rest of it escaped her.
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22 comments:
That is one scorching hot six! :)
That was....yep it sure was. Hot, sexy and sinfully delicious!
Holy hell was that hot. *fanning self*
That was... HAWT! Whew. I need a cold shower now. ;)
Very hot! Great job :)
Hot + good writing.
well, that was sexy, extremely well written and a pleasure to read!
Intense! Wonderful description.
Excellent hot description -
Whew! Holy hot six!
No time to TALK LOL! Very hot excerpt!
Wooh! My eyes are on fire! Hot six!
Okay, so I was happily reading along totally into this story, forgetting it was a vampire sex scene. So, when I came across the "distinct prick of his fang" line, I went, "WHAT??!!" LOL. Good job.
Very powerful six!
Oh Dec... Hot and delicious scene. I loved his concentration on her.
Totally intense. That's the way to write a hot scene, missy!
*pants* Holy crap, that was HOT! Beautifully written.
Hot six, great description
Room temperature to supernova in six sentences! Great job :)
zero to sixty in six, as a previous reviewer noted... and then there's the chilly suspicion about the fangs.
Vamps not my usual thing, but this was well done.
Very nice. "Tasting herself on his tongue" - there's a line I've heard before but not quite like this :)
Ouch! That six was so hot it burned!
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