Sunday, April 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to my SSS! For the months of March and April, I'm highlighting sentences from the very first novel I had published, a het vampire erotic romance called Chains of Jericho. It was the very first book I had final in EPIC's ebook awards (then called the EPPIE), and since I had two final this year, I figured this was a good time to share the one that started it all.

Continuing on from last week's scene with Maya and Dec's finally getting sexual...

He must’ve felt her orgasm coming. Seconds before his fucking and sucking sent her careening over the edge, Dec’s mouth slid down and away, his jaw dropping, his teeth grazing over the soft skin of her inner thigh before finding the spot where it was most sensitive. Maya felt the distinct prick of his fangs sinking into her flesh, but it was the first almost painful pull that catapulted her into coming, unfettering her as her climax picked her up in fiery waves and rocked her through its wake, everything spinning out of control around her as she rode it to its finish.

Maya was only half-aware of Dec disengaging from the bite. But when he slid up her body, his weight pressing her more firmly into the mattress, she turned automatically into his kiss, tasting herself on his tongue as she moaned in satisfaction. “That ... was...” she started to say when they broke apart, but the rest of it escaped her.


To check out all the other six sentence contributions, head over to the official website.

22 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

That is one scorching hot six! :)

Gem Sivad said...

That was....yep it sure was. Hot, sexy and sinfully delicious!

Dee Carney said...

Holy hell was that hot. *fanning self*

Tonya Burrows said...

That was... HAWT! Whew. I need a cold shower now. ;)

Zee Monodee said...

Very hot! Great job :)

Charmaine Gordon said...

Hot + good writing.

Alix Cameron said...

well, that was sexy, extremely well written and a pleasure to read!

Cate Masters said...

Intense! Wonderful description.

sue said...

Excellent hot description -

Karla Doyle said...

Whew! Holy hot six!

Veronica Scott said...

No time to TALK LOL! Very hot excerpt!

Melissa MacKinnon said...

Wooh! My eyes are on fire! Hot six!

Wildcats Wife said...

Okay, so I was happily reading along totally into this story, forgetting it was a vampire sex scene. So, when I came across the "distinct prick of his fang" line, I went, "WHAT??!!" LOL. Good job.

E. Jamie said...

Very powerful six!

diannehartsock said...

Oh Dec... Hot and delicious scene. I loved his concentration on her.

Denny S. Bryce said...

Totally intense. That's the way to write a hot scene, missy!

Sarah Ballance said...

*pants* Holy crap, that was HOT! Beautifully written.

Paula Martin said...

Hot six, great description

Corinne Davies said...

Room temperature to supernova in six sentences! Great job :)

E. P. Beaumont said...

zero to sixty in six, as a previous reviewer noted... and then there's the chilly suspicion about the fangs.

Vamps not my usual thing, but this was well done.

Skye Warren said...

Very nice. "Tasting herself on his tongue" - there's a line I've heard before but not quite like this :)

Alisha Robinson said...

Ouch! That six was so hot it burned!