All helped flood me with the reminder of how desperately I had loved this man. Because these were the threads that had bound us together. Moments that had created the life we wove. His face became indelibly etched on my brain. I saw Leandro when I slept, when he was outside and I was in, when I was away on assignment and desperate to return to my simple existence. Everywhere I turned, he was there.
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Beautiful insight into his feelings!
Very powerful. Great six, Vivien!
Great six!
Such STRONG emotions here. I feel the broken heart like it's my own.
Intriguing stuff, great descriptions of their bond.
Another well-written character moment, anguishing over love. Sigh. I always like a character in pain:).
Aww. "These were the threads" -- lovely. Very poignant.
Wow, you've really conveyed the longing in these six. Really well done.
A nice six. VERY romantic.
There are some excellent pieces of writing on this weeks 'six' and this snippet of yours is definitely one of them!
I love them. :) Recommending to a couple of friends.
I'm very moved by these six. Well done! :)
Wow, I really liked that - very powerful. great six!
L.A. Witt
Loved this emotion here. great 6!
This is so beautiful. My copy finally arrived! Can't wait to read it beginning to end. :)
Intense emotions!
This so emotional. I've deeply loved your excerpts throughout this book. Amazing!
very compelling description of his feelings, nice job!
Powerful six! Loved it!
Great description of his connection to Leandro. Well done six, Vivien. :)
Very touching. Nicely done.
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