Sunday, January 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to my SSS! This will be the last week I'm highlighting one of my Zodiac books, Capricorn: Forgotten Faces. In this final segment, Caleb has just figured out how to retrieve his lost memories, reliving them and realizing what all of them really mean.

All helped flood me with the reminder of how desperately I had loved this man. Because these were the threads that had bound us together. Moments that had created the life we wove. His face became indelibly etched on my brain. I saw Leandro when I slept, when he was outside and I was in, when I was away on assignment and desperate to return to my simple existence. Everywhere I turned, he was there.


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21 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Beautiful insight into his feelings!

K.E. Saxon said...

Very powerful. Great six, Vivien!

Alix Cameron said...

Great six!

Krystal Wade said...

Such STRONG emotions here. I feel the broken heart like it's my own.

Skye Warren said...

Intriguing stuff, great descriptions of their bond.

Denny S. Bryce said...

Another well-written character moment, anguishing over love. Sigh. I always like a character in pain:).

Ruthie said...

Aww. "These were the threads" -- lovely. Very poignant.

Meg Maguire said...

Wow, you've really conveyed the longing in these six. Really well done.

Daezarkian13 said...

A nice six. VERY romantic.

gemma parkes said...

There are some excellent pieces of writing on this weeks 'six' and this snippet of yours is definitely one of them!

Wendy said...

I love them. :) Recommending to a couple of friends.

Jessica Subject said...

I'm very moved by these six. Well done! :)

Lori W. said...

Wow, I really liked that - very powerful. great six!

L.A. Witt

BLMorticia said...

Loved this emotion here. great 6!

diannehartsock said...

This is so beautiful. My copy finally arrived! Can't wait to read it beginning to end. :)

Laura Kaye said...

Intense emotions!

Sarah Ballance said...

This so emotional. I've deeply loved your excerpts throughout this book. Amazing!

Angela Quarles said...

very compelling description of his feelings, nice job!

DeAnna Felthauser said...

Powerful six! Loved it!

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

Great description of his connection to Leandro. Well done six, Vivien. :)

Dee Carney said...

Very touching. Nicely done.