...All of a sudden, I yearned to take those emotions blazing in his eyes and wrap them around my lifeless heart. He could resuscitate it. I knew he could. The prospect both thrilled and terrified me.
Though my silence extended longer than I would have normally allowed it, Leandro didn’t push me to speak. He waited for me to catch up to where he’d been for centuries, and I knew, deep inside, he’d wait even longer if that was what it took.
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19 comments:
I really love these snippets. great job.
Heated emotion. Nice. BTW, I really like the cover.
That is very sweet. The emotional intensity definitely hooked me!
Intense - I like it.
aaaw, sweet! Great emotions!
Leandro sounds like a thoroughly irresistible man. Great six!
I love his emotions resuscitating her, great six!
*shiver* Very nice. Love the emotion you've conveyed!
This was a very nice piece. Very emotional. I like the connection between the two heroes. Great six!
Aww, he sounds like a definite keeper.
Your words are always so beautiful. Astoundingly so.
Love this! Nicely done!
Intense-you had me hooked.
Love this story! Bought it last week. Can't wait for it to get here!
Sweet six, Vivien. I love the realization and tenderness in such few lines. Nicely done. :)
Excellent, wonderful emotion and description in this snippet.
Very intense, Leandro sounds like quite the man :)
Centuries is a long time to wait! Love the intensity of emotions in this! Great descriptions!
Le sigh...
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