...The sweeping curves were utterly smooth, each symbol balanced, each integration perfect. His erect nipple was at its center, but the marks heightened his appeal rather than suppressed it. I wondered how he’d felt as I’d given it to him, if it had hurt when my blood had burned its way into his skin. I could imagine him stoic in the face of pain, eyes steady on mine as I did the task, love shining in their depths.
Without thinking, I bent my head and dragged my tongue along the uppermost symbol. Leandro shuddered and arched away from the bed.
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25 comments:
Oooh! Se-e-e-e-e-xy! Nicely done. Great six! :D
Oh, very sensual and sexy!
Your characters have great chemistry. I love this scene.
Really vivid six!
Very evocative!
So vivid. Excellent writing.
Wow, vivid and sexy!
arched away from the bed - nice
Sexy six, Vivien. I liked the description of the MC's reflection of the "tattooing". :)
Sensual by which I mean HOT. I can visualize that tattoo all right - terrific snippet!
just about the sexiest six I've read in a while--fantastic description.
I gulped on that one. Sizzling six today, Vivien. :)
Oh, a blood tattoo?! Now *that's* interesting!
oooh, steamy! Great 6!
Really liked the term, "…love shining in their depths." Very evocative. Great six!
So wonderfully sexy and sensual. I hope Caleb's memeory comes back before he breaks Leandro's heart. :)
Wonderfully vivid description. Great work!
Sensual scene! And that tattoo sounds fine! :) Great six!
Intense emotion that goes to the heart. Great six!
Mmmm...a dangerous and intense character. Well done in six sentences. Lots of sensual menace here. I like it.
Your voice is *amazing*!
Very sexy!
Girl, you're going to melt my screen and owe me a new computer! This has been an incredibly intense, sexy series. Wow!
Very sexy!
Very vivd snippet.
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