And as difficult as it was to believe I’d ever be so foolhardy to do what he claimed, too many coincidences stacked in his favor.
I bent my head. I pressed my lips to the top of his spine. My eyes closed in silent supplication, and I prayed fervently that I could take this man and keep him for my own, without any of the retribution that seemed inevitable.
I knew it couldn’t be.
But even an immortal can hope.
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Beautiful, l loved the emotion.
Well done! Very emotional scene.
Aww, love the inner turmoil here. Great six!
The last line leaves me wanting to read the next line and the next... Great job.
Sweet and sexy! A great six! :)
Great emotion in this snippet.
Sweet six, Vivien. I love the emotion in these snippets. :)
This is amazing. Superb snippet!
I'm hurting for him. Can't wait to see if he gets his heart's desire.
Hopeful despite that thread of despair. Beautifully written.
I really like this. Capricorn: Forgotten Faces just went on my TBR list.
Very emotional - loved it. Keep up the good work. x
I like the war between duty and desire.
Deeply emotional and kinda sad at the same time. Happy New Year.
Powerful six! Nicely done:-)
When you're immortal, what do you really have except hope? Fantastic six!
Fantastic emotion in this six!
Great six. Will he ever remember?
Hope springs eternal--so why not immortal? I hope he remembers and accepts the inevitable. Great emotional six!
Intriguing!
Nice six, Vivien. I love a girl that keeps hope alive! Happy New Year to you :)
Aww, beautiful and calming.
Ooh, I like this six . So hopeful. :)
Nice mix of emotion, desire and fear. I like it and the last sentence is definitely a hook.
Very moving six!
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