“Fuck it up, and it’s going to make Rudy think twice the next time something comes along the pipeline. Don’t tell me I’m wrong.”
Derek looked even unhappier than he’d seemed at the office. “I didn’t ask for you to help me.”
“No, I did that all on my lonesome. Because in spite of what my mouth ran off with before, you’re important to me, whether you want to be or not.”
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I hope they're going to kiss and make up. The tension between the two and then his confession at the end is great.
Always enjoy your dialogue. Good six.
is this a case of lovers working together? nice tension
I really like his last comment "Because in spite of what my mouth ran off with before, you’re important to me, whether you want to be or not." It brings all the emotion into it without saying too much. Beautiful six! :)
Great tension, awesome dialogue.
Wow, awesome convo here. :D
I like his intensity. Great dialogue.
Lovely take back. Nice! :)
~Xakara
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I enjoyed this. I loved his comment about caring about him dspite what he wants. Good dialog.
Great story. Waiting for my copy of the book to arrive. Yea!
Great tension and dialogue; love Sam's gruff concern.
Great tension and sweet words. I love your six as usual. :-)
I love the dialogue. Great job!
Wow! I'm guessing Derek wasn't ready to hear that!
Aww. Love the last line. Sounds like these two have a long talk coming.
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