tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post814103819899926308..comments2023-05-17T02:01:52.049-07:00Comments on Vivien Dean: Six Sentence SundayVivien Deanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-32734735935309407582011-09-20T04:24:35.778-07:002011-09-20T04:24:35.778-07:00Aww. Love the last line. Sounds like these two hav...Aww. Love the last line. Sounds like these two have a long talk coming.Hailey Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198366574573877171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-87413059232254701842011-09-20T00:57:34.386-07:002011-09-20T00:57:34.386-07:00Wow! I'm guessing Derek wasn't ready to he...Wow! I'm guessing Derek wasn't ready to hear that!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-92398465296262682011-09-19T16:43:42.824-07:002011-09-19T16:43:42.824-07:00I love the dialogue. Great job!I love the dialogue. Great job!D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-7483603156368578972011-09-18T21:05:04.796-07:002011-09-18T21:05:04.796-07:00Great tension and sweet words. I love your six as ...Great tension and sweet words. I love your six as usual. :-)Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11040482633103310689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-86211695399694857472011-09-18T19:27:59.463-07:002011-09-18T19:27:59.463-07:00Great tension and dialogue; love Sam's gruff c...Great tension and dialogue; love Sam's gruff concern.Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-89600861552571658602011-09-18T17:19:12.167-07:002011-09-18T17:19:12.167-07:00Great story. Waiting for my copy of the book to ar...Great story. Waiting for my copy of the book to arrive. Yea!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-14843646470759845302011-09-18T13:15:47.122-07:002011-09-18T13:15:47.122-07:00I enjoyed this. I loved his comment about caring a...I enjoyed this. I loved his comment about caring about him dspite what he wants. Good dialog.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14015834414245054989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-47518269691841597572011-09-18T12:35:12.528-07:002011-09-18T12:35:12.528-07:00Lovely take back. Nice! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dra...Lovely take back. Nice! :)<br /><br />~Xakara<br /><a href="http://xakara.livejournal.com/112845.html" rel="nofollow">A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-39235550392700932622011-09-18T11:47:29.287-07:002011-09-18T11:47:29.287-07:00I like his intensity. Great dialogue.I like his intensity. Great dialogue.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-14721353608438501752011-09-18T10:06:23.242-07:002011-09-18T10:06:23.242-07:00Wow, awesome convo here. :DWow, awesome convo here. :DS.Lirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787307019842983456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-643327023552986972011-09-18T10:00:19.808-07:002011-09-18T10:00:19.808-07:00Great tension, awesome dialogue.Great tension, awesome dialogue.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-6299797603136807052011-09-18T09:48:47.477-07:002011-09-18T09:48:47.477-07:00I really like his last comment "Because in sp...I really like his last comment "Because in spite of what my mouth ran off with before, you’re important to me, whether you want to be or not." It brings all the emotion into it without saying too much. Beautiful six! :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-1054708103545842882011-09-18T08:39:06.894-07:002011-09-18T08:39:06.894-07:00is this a case of lovers working together? nice te...is this a case of lovers working together? nice tensionsuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-44998476487670432672011-09-18T07:28:03.403-07:002011-09-18T07:28:03.403-07:00Always enjoy your dialogue. Good six.Always enjoy your dialogue. Good six.Denny S. Brycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13159554158362728407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-11282506586093105562011-09-18T07:19:28.675-07:002011-09-18T07:19:28.675-07:00I hope they're going to kiss and make up. The ...I hope they're going to kiss and make up. The tension between the two and then his confession at the end is great.Sondrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05546034231903326795noreply@blogger.com