Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hello, everyone! For the month of September, I'm going to feature snippets from my gay lawyer series, Wranglers. Four stories, four Sundays...yeah, that works out well. :)

The first is called Discovery.

As soon as he realized he was responding to the kiss, Derek grabbed Sam’s shoulders and shoved him away. His lips felt blistered, and he could still taste Sam even after he dragged the back of his hand across his mouth.

“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?” he snarled.

The thumb Sam drew across the corner of his lips, wiping away a slight line of spit, shook. Derek was too attuned to everything about the other man to miss it, though.

“Down in Texas, we call it cutting past the crap...”


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35 comments:

Brien Michaels said...

Do a sense a straight guy about to be turned out?? I'm gonna have to pick this one up. I'm in love with that last line, by the way!

sue said...

cutting past the crap is a good thing... nicely done

Lisa Fox said...

Well they certainly know how to do things in Texas it seems.

Cara McKenna said...

Evocative six—great job!

gemma parkes said...

Loved it, tense emotion building!

Cate Masters said...

Ha, love his response. Nice six.

Kathleen Grieve said...

Yes! And what does Derek call it? Can't wait for more!

Emily Cale said...

Love the last line on that!

sarahballance said...

Wow! Great six, and the last line kicks butt!

Rawiya said...

Wow, that is a great six! :D

Cara Bristol said...

Well done! Your last line packs a helluva punch.

KaceyHammell said...

OOH would love to read more!! Will be stalking your site for when this releases. I love hot lawyers.

that last line has me hooked. Thnx! :D

Sondra said...

I love it, especially the last line. Keep it real.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Cutting past the crap, indeed.

Piper said...

I love it. Cutting past the crap sounds good to me.

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol loved the last line!

Jessica Subject said...

Love the last line! A great six!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Oh love the last line! Cut the crap and kiss again!

Sonya Clark said...

That last line is terrific, great six!

Denny S. Bryce said...

That's a good six, and sharp dialogue.

Layna Pimentel said...

Love that last line!

Eleri Stone said...

Hee. Great setup...like the image of his thumb wiping away the little line of spit.

Christa Paige said...

What else does he do down in Texas? Vivid 6 sentence scene.

lynnemurray said...

Great tension, lawyers in lust! How will Derek respond? Suspenseful six!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Such a 'real' reaction and I love that small swipe across his lips. Fantastic motion and emotion in this six!

Alix said...

I love the Texas way, fantastically written six.

J.A. Beard said...

I laughed at that last line. Nice tension overall.

Jennifer Probst said...

OMG, I absolutely love this interaction. Great job!

Dee Carney said...

Woot! That was awesome!

Hailey Edwards said...

LOL Great scene. Cutting past the crap indeed.

Kharisma Rhayne said...

awesome six :) this sounds like it's great

JoAnne Kenrick said...

cutting past the crap! LOVE IT xx

mirriamsmyth said...

Wow, great six! Wonder how Derek's gonna respond to "cutting past the crap"...

Gem Sivad said...

Yep, straight to the point. And what a point! Great straight talk from a sexy Sam.

E. Jamie said...

Awesome six!