The first is called Discovery.
As soon as he realized he was responding to the kiss, Derek grabbed Sam’s shoulders and shoved him away. His lips felt blistered, and he could still taste Sam even after he dragged the back of his hand across his mouth.
“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?” he snarled.
The thumb Sam drew across the corner of his lips, wiping away a slight line of spit, shook. Derek was too attuned to everything about the other man to miss it, though.
“Down in Texas, we call it cutting past the crap...”
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35 comments:
Do a sense a straight guy about to be turned out?? I'm gonna have to pick this one up. I'm in love with that last line, by the way!
cutting past the crap is a good thing... nicely done
Well they certainly know how to do things in Texas it seems.
Evocative six—great job!
Loved it, tense emotion building!
Ha, love his response. Nice six.
Yes! And what does Derek call it? Can't wait for more!
Love the last line on that!
Wow! Great six, and the last line kicks butt!
Wow, that is a great six! :D
Well done! Your last line packs a helluva punch.
OOH would love to read more!! Will be stalking your site for when this releases. I love hot lawyers.
that last line has me hooked. Thnx! :D
I love it, especially the last line. Keep it real.
Cutting past the crap, indeed.
I love it. Cutting past the crap sounds good to me.
lol loved the last line!
Love the last line! A great six!
Oh love the last line! Cut the crap and kiss again!
That last line is terrific, great six!
That's a good six, and sharp dialogue.
Love that last line!
Hee. Great setup...like the image of his thumb wiping away the little line of spit.
What else does he do down in Texas? Vivid 6 sentence scene.
Great tension, lawyers in lust! How will Derek respond? Suspenseful six!
Such a 'real' reaction and I love that small swipe across his lips. Fantastic motion and emotion in this six!
I love the Texas way, fantastically written six.
I laughed at that last line. Nice tension overall.
OMG, I absolutely love this interaction. Great job!
Woot! That was awesome!
LOL Great scene. Cutting past the crap indeed.
awesome six :) this sounds like it's great
cutting past the crap! LOVE IT xx
Wow, great six! Wonder how Derek's gonna respond to "cutting past the crap"...
Yep, straight to the point. And what a point! Great straight talk from a sexy Sam.
Awesome six!
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