Nothing says procrastination better than a trip to a local bar.
I can’t even say it was an arbitrary choice. I spent fifteen minutes Googling gay bars in Rome—fifteen wasted minutes, I might add, since my command on the Italian language consists mostly of tourist phrases I’d picked up to help me on my trip and not the ability to read conversational reviews posted by other desperate gay men.
All right, the desperate part of that description is probably obvious transference on my part. It’s been a stressful couple of months. I’m not feeling as nice as I usually try to be.
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15 comments:
Makes me wonder why he's so desperate and why he's under stress. His reading reviews of a gay bar in a language he doesn't really understand is a telling detail that underscores his desperation. Great six!
Oh! I like him already!
I love that last line. Such a great insight into his character. Lovely six!
Interesting set up, much to think about as far as this character. Very well done six!
I adore the humor in this! Leaves many questions, and does so with great voice. Fab!
Love the title! and the situation. Hope some of the men speak English, though myabe body language will suffice...
Great voice to this character. Wonderful interior monologue, too. Really makes me feel for him, and the last bit hooked me.
I agree with Cate, terrific voice and characterization. I hope he climbs out of that hole soon.
Poor Jonathan. But I'm loving his voice.
Intriguing setup, look forward to finding out more.
Love his voice! Your six makes me wonder why he is procrastinating. And I'm curious about what happens next.
Wonderful internals...you painted a great picture of his personality!
You have a wonderful way of making your characters real. I want to know all about him now. Why so desperate and lonely? Who is he? Can't wait to read more. :)
very natural...love the voice...love him!! Fab six xx
Poor guy! I wonder where he ends up? Probably somewhere ver-ver sexy, LOL! Great six!!
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