“...in case that’s not enough, I’m also the only one who really cares what happens to the pair of you. If I had any sense at all, I’d turn you both over to this Assembly myself. But I’m not doing that, and do you know why?”
Apparently there was no stopping Mathias when it came to Darby. “Because of those little noises we get you to make when you come?”
Heedless of his other injuries, Edmund smacked Mathias on the side of the head.
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35 comments:
LOL! Oh, Mathias does not know when to keep his mouth shut, does he? Great 6, Vivien!
Blabbermouth! lol. Great six, Vivien...
Heedless of his other injuries..great work in your six!
Lol! I think he deserved that smack.
Haha, fireworks. I can tell they have issues to work out.
LOL "Because of those little noises we get you to make when you come?" LOL great six, Vivien! :)
ROFLMAO! Cute!
LMAO! That was fantastic!
ROFL! He deserved that!
HA! They're too funny!
Like that last line! Great six.
Funny!
LOL Great six!
Ouch! Very funny.
tee hee! A very funny six!
lol Loved this!
LOL Great pacing and humor in this piece. I would have smacked him too. ;)
Awesome humor! ;-)
LMAO oh my god that's hilarious! He deserved that smack on his head!
yep, a well deserved smack - great whimsy
Yep, two males with too much testosterone.
Well that was clearly not the right answer. ;)
Thank God for those noises!
Hee hee ... love the dialouge. *wink* Love those little noises too. Great six, Vivien! Happy Sunday!
You have me very curious about these three. Love that in a story. :)
LOL! You should check out Saturday Snark at mariesexton.net. Your boys would fit in great there!
LOL! Oh, what a dirty little funny he made! Loved your six :-)
Lol! Gotta love his sense of humour, and the interaction between these 3 is outstanding :) Great job!
Hehee, love the humour in that six. :)
Hehehehehehe, too funny. :)
Guess we know who's really in charge. Great six!
lmao!
lol, brilliant!
These characters ooze authenticity. Great job! Excellent six.
LOL...great line in there!
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