Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to my SSS! For the month of November, I've been highlighting snippets from my LSB m/m/f vampire erotic romance, Mercy of These Bones. Darby and Mathias had a go last week. Now it's time for a little Mathias and Edmund.

There was no time to gauge Edmund’s reaction before the other vampire’s mouth crashed to his, fangs tearing through his lip to coat them both in blood. Mathias opened to the assault, welcoming the ravenous sweeps of Edmund’s tongue, but all too soon, Edmund was breaking away, the tight hold he had on Mat’s head all he needed to start pushing him to his knees.

“Should have fucked you into submission four years ago,” he said. His eyes gleamed silver as he regarded Mathias kneeling in front of him. “Or chained you to the bed to keep you from doing something as stupid as breaking the siring laws.”

Mathias would have come back with some smart remark, but his brain had stopped working at the sight of Edmund’s thick cock visible at the open vee of his pants.


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23 comments:

Cara Michaels said...

Very intense 6, Vivien. Sex and violence is a potent mix. Looking forward to reading more.

Meg Maguire said...

Angst sex—one of my very favorites! More, please!

Gem Sivad said...

Yes, well, sometimes conversation is unnecessary. lol. Hot six!

sue said...

great concept - that's a law not to break. And just a peek can be sooo arousing...

Eleri Stone said...

What a nice raw edge to this. Love it.

Nina Pierce said...

Very intense!

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

Holy moly, Vivien! *fans self* you got my heart racing with that six! Well done. :)

Gayle Ramage said...

Ooh-la-la! Don't think I've ever read vamp-on-vamp sexy times on SSS before!

JoAnn Ross said...

Wow. Fanning my face here. (And breaking siring laws???) Super way of throwing yet another bear into their canoe! :)

Vivien Jackson said...

I empathize with Mat: my brain would probably have stopped working under such circumstances, too! Hot six.

Alix said...

Tearing through his lip, wonderful pace, great six!

diannehartsock said...

Oh my, this is about to get very good. Lovely six!

Sterling Priest said...

Tipping my hat, taking a dip in the cool water trough. Great word work! Six Gun Salute!

sarahballance said...

Whoa, that's HOT! (I admit, I'm a sucker for "rip you apart" lead-ins, LOL.)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Graphic stuff!

mirriamsmyth said...

Hot six! And it sounds like it's about to get hotter!

Stacey said...

*drools* That was so perfectly fantastic! I want--need--to read this book!

veronicascott said...

Powerful, a lot of emotion, looking forward to what comes next of course! Great excerpt!

Zee Monodee said...

Wow! That was hot, intense, and emotionally strong as well. Great job!

Sondrae Bennett said...

Wow! That's quite a six. I'll have to add this to my tbr pile on Goodreads! :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Now that's a scene! Hot, powerful and very graphic. Nice!

Sandra Bunino said...

Intense six, Vivien! Very vivid scene.

Ranae Rose said...

Sexy vampires always make for a good six. :)