With his arms wrapped tightly around Jarrett’s shoulders, he poured his heart into their kisses, for better or worse, and silently begged Jarrett to fill in the blanks.
It felt like he did.
His lips moved in the same ways, his tongue sought out the same corners of Eli’s mouth, yet, Eli knew the difference, there in the touch of a hand or the small sound Jarrett couldn’t hold back. He hooked a leg around the back of Jarrett’s calf, the only reminder he could create about what they’d been leading toward. If they didn’t get around to fucking, he’d miss it, but he wouldn’t regret what was likely to take its place. Curtained within the walls of Jarrett’s arms, his body sang, more alive than he could remember it ever being before.
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32 comments:
Wonderful interior monologue. Love your description, especially "his body sang"
Intense six! Something tells me they're going to get around to it. Can't wait to find out if I'm right next week ;)
Wonderful six sentences, Vivien! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!
Stephanie Adkins
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Well done six.And filled with intensity galore.
Lovely. I especially liked, "Curtained within the walls of Jarrett’s arms, his body sang…"
Intense, emotional read. Love your six!
Emotional and romantic. Nice!
I love the emotion in this six. Well done, Vivien. :)
Awesome emotion!
there are some things better than sex. surrounded by the arms of love is one of them
Intense six - and great description.
Sensual six! Nice!
This has such a bittersweet feel to it. Beautifully written.
Oh, this is the moment! I can feel the tension.
Oh Eli. It's so hard to love and not know if the feeling's returned. I hope he gets his moment with Jarrett! Lovely emotional scene. I love your writing.
Wow, very hot description, lovely 6 Vivien!
:D
Very sexy!
Very emotional.
I really hope they "get around to it:. :)
I love the tenderness in your snippet. Sexy six!
Beautiful prose, love your "voice". I feel for these two people and I just met them in six sentences. Excellent 6!
Very sensual! Nicely done. :)
Perfect monologue! I got sucked right in! Nice 6!
Great job with this six. I loved it.
A sensuous and yet emotionally sensitive six!
Drew me right in...hot six!
Such a lyrical, sensual voice. Love your writing, Vivien.
Very sensual :) Great six!
Nice! I like it a lot!
<3 Love. It. The writing is beautiful.
intense yet tender scene, love this six!
Lovely six!
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