This sounded like a car door slamming, but it was nothing compared to the way the blood sprayed out the other side of Baptiste’s neck, splattering across the beige wall and the frame of his Aagaard print.
Baptiste crumpled sideways. He landed like a broken doll at the edge of the glass end table.
Swallowing down the bile in his throat, Jarrett swung his gaze back up to Sandora. The gun was now aimed directly at Jarrett’s chest.
“How’s that memory of yours now?” Sandora asked.
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32 comments:
Awesome, action packed and I loved the reference to the splattering across the frame of the Aagaard print. Great work.
Love that final line! Great mini-cliffhanger.
Excellent - vivid without being overly gory. Loved the reference to the blood spatter on the print too.
Wow! That was intense. Really liked the descriptions and the action. Great six.
Intense six. Great writing.
Very descriptive, loved this six!
Great tension! I bet that's a memory jogger :)
Great unexpected details. Quite a cliffhanger!
Wow! Vivid and intense--so easy to see this. Wonderful six!
very visual - a good thing though not a happy scene
WOW! Intense, action-packed and vivid. Nicely done!
So intense! Sensational six.
Great, intense six!
Extremely vivid but told in a matter-of-fact way - by focusing on details - that makes it all the more chilling. So well done!
Loved it and the title!
Brutal! And perfectly executed.
Oooh, so good! This reminds of the spy novels I read as a young teenager, or hard-boiled detective novels.
Whoa. Excellent description! Jeez, my mouth dried up.
Oh, wow, intense last line there. Yikes! Great six!
Vivid action. Tension really went up on the last line. Great snippet.
Gulp...don't know if HE remembers, but I sure do. Intense!
Great action sequence. Very vivid and intense.
Wow, that woke me up. Great action and smoothly written. Nice!
Ouch! That had to hurt! Nice six! :)
Wow, whoever Sandora is, ya gotta hate him. Intense action and a strong cliffhanger--powerful six!
Yikes! Definately an intense six.
So full of tension! I want to know what happens next. Great six! :)
Very vivid, love the details.
Wow! Great hook. Hope you'll post more from this one on Sunday?
Oh man, you have me biting my nails! Well done six! :)
Oh that's quite an image!
Nice 6
O_O Holy Moley! Great six, but damn!
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