Sunday, October 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to my SSS! For the month of October, I'm continuing with snippets from my Boys of the Zodiac novel, Libra: Outlined in Ink. You've met Jarrett and Eli. Now experience their first kiss. Or part of it anyway. ;)

Eli barely got his hand out of the way before Jarrett sealed their mouths together, muscles twitching like they’d been Tased, then leaping with newfound energy to fold around Jarrett’s upper body. The kiss was supposed to be functional, the kind given as the precursor to abandoning any sense of foreplay and going right for the cock. Jarrett had given enough of those in his lifetime, even if occasionally, he’d wanted more.

But from the instant their lips met, supposed to be flew out the window. Eli opened to him with a surprised little whimper that went straight to Jarrett’s cock, all need and delight and hunger rolled into one tight, bleached, electrified package. He drank down Jarrett’s kiss like he’d been parched for it, and though he held his own, twisting his tongue around Jarrett’s until Jarrett’s brain was ready to explode, he let Jarrett lead the whole way.


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26 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Wow! That is an incredible kiss!

sue said...

very hot and romantic at the same time

Denny S. Bryce said...

you write the hell out of a kiss, girl. nice.

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

Highly erotic and beautifully written. I loved Jarrett's recognition of something different. Well done.

Cate Masters said...

Love his voice throughout this - unique and hot!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Nice! Love it!

Taryn Kincaid said...

So hot! And what a great line this is:
"all need and delight and hunger rolled into one tight, bleached, electrified package."

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Taryn said it for me. Quite a line and quite a kiss!

Cara Bristol said...

That's some powerful kiss.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Now that's a kiss to remember!

Cassandra Carr said...

Oh mah. I love some man on man action...

melissamackinnon said...

He drank down Jarrett's kiss.... I love that line!

Jessica K said...

That is some kiss! I didn't know Libras could be that passionate.

Ruthie said...

I like the surprised little whimper, and the use of "tight, bleached, electrified" -- original!

Hailey Edwards said...

Passionate six! Love the turnaround from initiating the expected to receiving the unexpected.

Gem Sivad said...

Smoking hot kiss. WTG!

Eleri Stone said...

The "surprised little whimper" *sigh*

Sandra Bunino said...

Jarrett's brain is not the only thing ready to explode! ;-) Wow, what a sexy, sexy six!

Jessica Subject said...

Intense and so sexy! :)

Nichelle Gregory said...

Oh, my, that was some kiss!

Victoria Adams said...

Beautifully written. Highly erotic.

Lynne Murray said...

Erotic with lovely romantic overtones! Sensuous six!

Meg Maguire said...

Love this: "abandoning any sense of foreplay and going right for the cock". Not unlike the jugular. Great line!

sarahballance said...

Your words are stunning. GREAT six!

Gemma Parkes said...

Very sexy, great description!

E. Jamie said...

Awesome six!