Eli barely got his hand out of the way before Jarrett sealed their mouths together, muscles twitching like they’d been Tased, then leaping with newfound energy to fold around Jarrett’s upper body. The kiss was supposed to be functional, the kind given as the precursor to abandoning any sense of foreplay and going right for the cock. Jarrett had given enough of those in his lifetime, even if occasionally, he’d wanted more.
But from the instant their lips met, supposed to be flew out the window. Eli opened to him with a surprised little whimper that went straight to Jarrett’s cock, all need and delight and hunger rolled into one tight, bleached, electrified package. He drank down Jarrett’s kiss like he’d been parched for it, and though he held his own, twisting his tongue around Jarrett’s until Jarrett’s brain was ready to explode, he let Jarrett lead the whole way.
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26 comments:
Wow! That is an incredible kiss!
very hot and romantic at the same time
you write the hell out of a kiss, girl. nice.
Highly erotic and beautifully written. I loved Jarrett's recognition of something different. Well done.
Love his voice throughout this - unique and hot!
Nice! Love it!
So hot! And what a great line this is:
"all need and delight and hunger rolled into one tight, bleached, electrified package."
Taryn said it for me. Quite a line and quite a kiss!
That's some powerful kiss.
Now that's a kiss to remember!
Oh mah. I love some man on man action...
He drank down Jarrett's kiss.... I love that line!
That is some kiss! I didn't know Libras could be that passionate.
I like the surprised little whimper, and the use of "tight, bleached, electrified" -- original!
Passionate six! Love the turnaround from initiating the expected to receiving the unexpected.
Smoking hot kiss. WTG!
The "surprised little whimper" *sigh*
Jarrett's brain is not the only thing ready to explode! ;-) Wow, what a sexy, sexy six!
Intense and so sexy! :)
Oh, my, that was some kiss!
Beautifully written. Highly erotic.
Erotic with lovely romantic overtones! Sensuous six!
Love this: "abandoning any sense of foreplay and going right for the cock". Not unlike the jugular. Great line!
Your words are stunning. GREAT six!
Very sexy, great description!
Awesome six!
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