Though he’d bleached his hair, the shade complemented his tawny skin. The eyes he fixed on Jarrett smiled as warmly as his mouth did, a honeyed brown that threatened to drown anyone who met them too long. He’d been a cute teenager, but time had chiseled him into a striking young man, the body that rose to greet Jarrett solidly built beneath the faded jeans and tan T-shirt.
“Wow,” Eli said as he approached. He had to look up a little to meet Jarrett’s gaze. “I had completely forgotten how much room you take up.”
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27 comments:
Wow is right! Felt like I was seeing him through Jarrett's eyes, but was his comment an insult? Great work.
Great description that had me visualizing this sexy hunk.
Yummmmm. Very vivid descriptions, and LMAO at 'forgot how much room you take up'. NICE!!!
ooh vivid. i want to know Jarrett more. love the writing. imagery is great.
wonderful 6
Love that last line! Yummy six!
Wow, such amazing description!
I really liked his appraisal and Eli's parting comment. Well done! :)
Nice visuals! Can totally see him!
He sounds delicious. Love the bit of humor at the end.
Great description. He sounds delicious.
What an intriguing description! Compelling six!
I love that line, "how much room you take up." It lets us reader know without being obvious just how big he is. Great six!
I smell some romance brewing, some hot romance! Good six. And great concept- boys of the zodiac.
Love the last line! Nicely done!
Mmmm, love that line, "forgotten how much room you took up".
Oh, I totally dig it. The last line is killer. Awesome six!
Love the six Vivien! :D
Sounds like he's matured quite nicely. :)
Oh my! I like it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I like the sound of Eli. :) Looks like Jarrett likes the look of him too.
Arf! Sounds somebody is going to fall... ;-)
Great six!
Barb
I had the perfect comment for this yesterday but would not post. I've switched to crome now. It sounds like they will be reacquainted - very nice
Oh, yummy description! Love it and want to see more of these two!
Very vivid description. Felt I was there.
Using the Zodiac is a great idea! Libras can be such party animals, it sounds like a fun time is soon to be had by all! Hot six!
I want more. I feel the deepseated desire to get to know that overgrown man a little better. Great six!
Eli doesn't stand a chance resisting this guy! :)
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