The first caress was almost chaste, his ripe mouth catching on my lower lip where my skin was dryer than his. I smelled coffee on his warm breath, which inexplicably prickled my taste buds. I’d only just sipped my own, but this hinted at something richer, more sunshine like that created by his music beating down on the back of my neck. My lips parted for more of it.
He took that as an invitation.
I think, perhaps, it was.
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23 comments:
Love the heat in this six! I think I need a cup of coffee ;)
Yummy. Love the last line, as if he's still deciding what he feels. Great six!
Damn, that was deliciously sexy. Fabulous six!
I think, perhaps, it was too! Tasty six!
Mmm. Very sexy interplay. I love the language and imagery. Great six!
Lovely six xx hot.
Sexy! These zodiac snippets only get better and better!
his music beating down on the back of my neck. - so lyrical! Loved it. Thanks for sharing!
Doesn't sound like any of the Alaskans I know.
Love Caleb's curiosity and the sensual description. Very nice 6. :)
Oo, love this description, and her thought process. :)
What a kiss! Well done.
Fabulous sexy six!
Ooooh, I LIKE that intimate description of their kiss.
Oh, wow, love this! You built beautifully to that last line.
Wow! This was a heated six! I loved your use of imagery. Looking forward to next time! :)
No perhaps about it--that was an invitation. Loved the rhythm of your prose. Well done!
This one sizzles with sensual tension. Absolutely love it! (Must make coffee...)
Wow. Intense! Love it.
Very creative, evocative and effective.
Love that innocence in the opening, followed by the warm up. :)
Love the last sentence!
very hot!
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