tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post2960976276760428140..comments2023-05-17T02:01:52.049-07:00Comments on Vivien Dean: Six Sentence SundayVivien Deanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-67583509925562480132012-03-04T16:04:16.672-08:002012-03-04T16:04:16.672-08:00Oh, loved this snippet!Oh, loved this snippet!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-76134947887588384692012-03-04T16:02:03.912-08:002012-03-04T16:02:03.912-08:00Love your six! It makes me want to read more :)Love your six! It makes me want to read more :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00320711269916905037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-29757123691710607272012-03-04T15:40:28.569-08:002012-03-04T15:40:28.569-08:00Good for you, Maya! But I don't think the poli...Good for you, Maya! But I don't think the police will be much help... :)diannehartsockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15874628384426574320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-49630322606072256852012-03-04T14:39:26.354-08:002012-03-04T14:39:26.354-08:00Something tells me it's not going to be that e...Something tells me it's not going to be that easy....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11805206329378779413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-32987954431564833142012-03-04T12:01:02.473-08:002012-03-04T12:01:02.473-08:00Ooh, this is tense, l hope the police are there fo...Ooh, this is tense, l hope the police are there for her and not answering some other call!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-3324248962523611132012-03-04T10:56:36.349-08:002012-03-04T10:56:36.349-08:00You go, Maya!You go, Maya!Cara McKennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16654280974490334457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-11059732468433653252012-03-04T10:43:56.313-08:002012-03-04T10:43:56.313-08:00Glad she thought to call 911 before she rushed out...Glad she thought to call 911 before she rushed out to help--but was it enough? I'm here, BTW--don't know why my link was inactivated.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-19765476508017245382012-03-04T09:41:28.228-08:002012-03-04T09:41:28.228-08:00Love her attitude, and I suspect it'll serve h...Love her attitude, and I suspect it'll serve her well in coming days, er, nights.Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-56551444529560543802012-03-04T09:28:38.530-08:002012-03-04T09:28:38.530-08:00I love her retort to him. Great six.I love her retort to him. Great six.Nina Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14548896481430215466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-59602119265680755722012-03-04T09:24:22.875-08:002012-03-04T09:24:22.875-08:00Oooh, that "what did you do?" really rai...Oooh, that "what did you do?" really raises the tension here. Great job on this six! (And good luck with the awards!)Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-35432255996589000922012-03-04T09:10:43.954-08:002012-03-04T09:10:43.954-08:00Those police lights gave me a sense of relief, exc...Those police lights gave me a sense of relief, except for some lingering dread that even the cops might not be enough in this situation! Great excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-57795768602534466682012-03-04T09:04:52.025-08:002012-03-04T09:04:52.025-08:00I like this -- very different reactions to those f...I like this -- very different reactions to those flashing lights! His "What did you do?" gives a nice glimpse of his character.Ruthiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00322523081345496027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-17568930822004041362012-03-04T08:41:56.194-08:002012-03-04T08:41:56.194-08:00Well I miss the characters from last week. These t...Well I miss the characters from last week. These two certainly got off to a bad footing so it would seem. Don't think he appreciates the coppers presence<br /><br />could you turn off the catcha pleasesuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-88393174987259946522012-03-04T08:34:01.143-08:002012-03-04T08:34:01.143-08:00Wow, such an intriguing excerpt! :)Wow, such an intriguing excerpt! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-40434476295973859392012-03-04T07:35:18.368-08:002012-03-04T07:35:18.368-08:00Ha! Take that. Yeah, I'm not really thinking i...Ha! Take that. Yeah, I'm not really thinking it'll stop him, but it was a good try on her part. :) Fun six, Vivien.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-4790626033313270032012-03-04T06:25:40.049-08:002012-03-04T06:25:40.049-08:00Nice tension. The internal dialogue really gets th...Nice tension. The internal dialogue really gets the reader inside her head. Nicely done!A.S. Fenichelhttp://www.asfenichel.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-56730823819359673362012-03-04T05:05:23.532-08:002012-03-04T05:05:23.532-08:00The police car strobe would be quite a relief in t...The police car strobe would be quite a relief in this situation. Great six!Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8050293415506078273.post-91587254690134721632012-03-04T04:01:08.684-08:002012-03-04T04:01:08.684-08:00nice postnice postसहज समाधि आश्रमhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12983359980587248264noreply@blogger.com